Random Thought! #43

Daydreams and castles floating in the air,
Make believes that keep away despair.
A soul lost in hoping forever.
Let it go, she is told.
But not to the dead does life unfold?

So, there were mixed reactions when I wrote this one; veering on two extreme ends. Want you to comment what you think of this one as a reader. An exercise to check whether my thoughts as a writer align with those of my readers.😃

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  1. Mark Ryan says:

    Good to see it breathed into exitance.

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    1. Mark Ryan says:

      *Existence. Though maybe the nuclear bloom is present.

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  2. A. Shruti says:

    You said it! Exitance is more likely though I hope the ink in the pen doesn’t dry up again.

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